David Guinness

I'd like to hear a recording of this. The verse is slightly distracting when read, because there is not always a clear lyrical pattern, but it may flow perfectly in ...

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Welcome to YWS, Raven! It's interesting... I felt frustration when reading, similar to the frustration the narrator feels, but probably not for a reason you would prefer. For seventeen lines, ...

Simple, pleasant poem.

This is a beautifully written sonnet. I like how there exists a mirror between the use of pentameter and the "blood that pulses through my limbs." The imagery throughout is ...

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The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Insanity is... well, insanity! I don't know... :? But it's always Pat Buchanan.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Welcome, Sage! Hope you enjoy your stay at YWS. If you need help, I probably can't help you, so take Poor Imp up on her offer. ;) Though I'm available ...

How could you not know what I mean?

I'm losing my points?!?!?! Not that I have many to begin with...

(ha) Boat (he road the boat ashore. actually, there are several other Mikes I would have put down, but you wouldn't have gotten my obscure references)